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Click HERE to enter. Hi, so finally I get to post up my story. I have decided to give my story the name of 'Black Fairytale'. Hahax. This is the story I spent quite some time writing. It was originally supposed to be drawn out, but I have to write it out instead because my drawing is worse than a primary school kid. Haix why did I have no talent in drawing? So, the format of this story would somehow be like a manga (Japanese comic), meaning the story is split into small parts called 'volumes' and even smaller parts called 'chapters'. And like a mangaka (manga artist) posting in Shounen Jump, I will be posting a chapter of my story here every week. At least let me act like a mangaka. A mangaka who cannot draw!! This story is originally meant to be written in Chinese, since I am able to come out with more fanciful names which are in Chinese. But then most people read English, and since I am writing a story, I might as well write it in English so more people are able to read. There are names and terms which are supposed to be in Chinese, but I am doing a translation from it and I will put a short note to explain the meaning. Another thing, this whole story is my work, I did not copy from any one and all ideas are my own. If there is any co-incidence, I really did not copy them. Sometimes I even have to change the plot and crack my head because it is too similar to some other story. So, since I spend so much effort, I would appreciate it if those who read do not copy and claim it as your own. Not that my story is so amazing. I didn't even know whether the readers will like it or not. Regardless, I am proud of it. Also, for this final version after all the editing I have done and put it up here, there is no one to beta-read for me to correct all my grammar mistakes, sentence structures etc. Although I have looked at it carefully to eliminate as many mistakes as I can, I am not able to correct all grammatical mistakes. I am only a human. All I can say is I take pride in it and I gave my best for it. So please bear with me if there are any grammer mistakes or sentence structure errors. Vocabulary wise there should be no problem. The words I used are simple words, because my vocabulary range do not contain big words. Anyone who graduated primary (elementary) school should be able to read it. Plotholes wise, I hope there are not. Comments of my stories can go to the forum. So, here I am, after a long long time I am here posting it. It started as my daydreams until my friend asked me to write it down. So I want to thank her. Her name is Michelle. L, and she was the one who got me started. I didn't know writing was so fun. I didn't like to write last time. And when my story was still in a skeleton form, my first beta-reader had encouraged me and helped me test read it. Her online name is Odessa. She has been busy and could not beta-read for me now though. The third person I want to thank goes by the name of Almakos. He is the one who design this wallpaper specially for me to set it as background for my story section. Thank you so much. To these 3 people, thank you, although you might not know your name being mentioned here. Ok I have talked quite long. Click HERE below to read the story! I hope you enjoy it and don't hesitate to tell me any comments you have! Of course, do not flame me. You can criticize but definately not flaming. Oh ya, in case anyone did really comment, I am not going to change the plot for you. Hahax. Click HERE to enter. |